"Dear Art Department,
The latest revision looks great - the elements are well balanced and we love the way it flows - but we think using this stock photo of the girls isn't the best idea.
Didn't we agree at the last meeting to stop using the Fellatio Library? Remember, the client notes specify North American distribution only, not European. You did a great job of placing the image of the microphone and stand, there aren't any visible remnants of the, uh, fellatee (unlike the Kraft Mac & Cheese ad that unfortunately wound up in January's Better Homes and Gardens), but still, either find a shot of women actually singing, or (as a last resort) have Dave shoot what we need.
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